I peeked down the arena
The two sides clashed
Soldier's wails heard
Blood soaked bodies
Comrades rests
Smeared with blood
Vultures seen circling
Guardian angels where are they?
Victory and defeat
Jubilant and gloomy
A scene from a battle field
Where is peace?
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lovely ani...:)
nice imagery dude...keep on writing
Where there is love,there is peace.
Good to see that at your age you think of such serious issues. I like the images that you provide with your poems...highly illustrative.
Great illustration here!!! Yes, as Twisted Factory spotted, this is a leap for your age. Great going!!!
In the end, with no offence intended to you, get back at this in a few years time cause you could polish this to be excellent!!! Mind you, it is very good now. But, you can make it better. Give it time.
So, that answers the question on your profile "me??? UNIQUE" - yes, my friend!!! you are special in your very own way!!! Keep writing!!!
Thank you mom, manoj, padameshwar for your encouraging comments...
due to mumbai bomb blast and the constant fights in kashmir, lots of people died. it is sad. Peace is what every one want.
Thank you very much brosreview. my mom told me that your name is Ajay. thank you for your comments and your suggestions.