The king left his castle
Getting ready for a battle
As he left his castle
He saw some cattle
They formed an arrow mark
Which led to an abandoned park
There lived a scary troll
But a good one at heart
The troll gave the king a diamond ball
Thanking the troll he left the park
Inside the ball
He heard a brawl
He placed the ball close to his ears
And heard a voice that told him “Beware”
- TO BE CONTINUED
awsome... waiting for the next part...write soon
thanks, ill soon write the next part....
Hi lil champ...oops i shoudn't be calling you little. You have entered you teens. Glad that you are back with a bang. Can't wait to read the next part sweetie.
Simple one!!! Ahem, work on this again and you could make it better, I believe. Cheers!!!
thanks amma, whatever i write u say awesome. i don't believe you.
thank you twisted factory. i am sorry for behaving badly and deleted all my posts before.more than what i wrote, i lost all your comments. mom always ask me to control my anger. i promise i will try to in my future.
thank you ajay. yes. i will work on it again. i am planning to write 3 parts of this poem and will write during my hols.